Essay exemplars nz

Check the samples below to learn how some University of Auckland students craft their academic writing. • How academic is your writing? (University of Auckland)

For Achieved, the student needs to create a fluent and coherent visual text which develops, sustains and structures ideas, using verbal and visual language. This involves demonstrating understanding of audience and purpose through the development of ideas and links between them throughout a visual text.

For a more secure Merit, the student could respond further to the statements about ‘ desire and temptation ’ (2) and the choices the Cullens have to make about the conflict between their ‘ nature ’ and ‘ normal lives ’ (3). Further response, supported by specific details, could be made about the flaws this student sees in the text (5).

For Excellence, the student needs to create a fluent and coherent visual text which develops, sustains and structures ideas, using verbal and visual language, and commands attention.